[Cerowrt-devel] draft of my letter to the fcc

[Cerowrt-devel] draft of my letter to the fcc

[Dave Taht]

this is a draft letter to the fcc. It kind of needs a title, more
footnotes, and other formatting - and if more folk here are willing to
sign, we can get rid of the first person stuff and make it "we". A
review for accuracy would be nice, and I can put it up on google docs
for a group edit if you like.

I'll also argue the closing sentences could be stronger.

http://snapon.lab.bufferbloat.net/~d/fcc_alternate_guidelines.odt

but I need a break. was up all night.

-- 
Dave Täht
endo is a terrible disease: http://www.gofundme.com/SummerVsEndo

Re: [Cerowrt-devel] draft of my letter to the fcc

[Toke Høiland-Jørgensen]

Dave Taht <dave.taht@gmail.com> writes:

> this is a draft letter to the fcc. It kind of needs a title, more
> footnotes, and other formatting - and if more folk here are willing to
> sign, we can get rid of the first person stuff and make it "we". A
> review for accuracy would be nice, and I can put it up on google docs
> for a group edit if you like.

I'll certainly happily sign it; I already submitted my own (fairly
short) comment, but that shouldn't prevent me from signing this, I
guess?

One point, though: On the comment web site the max length of submitted
comments is 5000 characters; yours is more than twice that long. Don't
know if they lift that limit for document uploads (which was an option),
but you may want to look into that ;)

If you do need to shorten it, it gets a little ranty in the middle, so
some of that could probably be cut down, or removed entirely...

-Toke

Re: [Cerowrt-devel] draft of my letter to the fcc

[Dave Taht]

google comments enabled here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VTOHEpRXSvhWvQ0leM-sROJ_XC7Fk1WjFXq57ysFtAA/edit?usp=sharing

I need a nap.

I sure as hell hope I can upload a long pdf.

yes it gets ranty in the middle.


On Tue, Sep 8, 2015 at 5:37 AM, Toke Høiland-Jørgensen <toke@toke.dk> wrote:
> Dave Taht <dave.taht@gmail.com> writes:
>
>> this is a draft letter to the fcc. It kind of needs a title, more
>> footnotes, and other formatting - and if more folk here are willing to
>> sign, we can get rid of the first person stuff and make it "we". A
>> review for accuracy would be nice, and I can put it up on google docs
>> for a group edit if you like.
>
> I'll certainly happily sign it; I already submitted my own (fairly
> short) comment, but that shouldn't prevent me from signing this, I
> guess?
>
> One point, though: On the comment web site the max length of submitted
> comments is 5000 characters; yours is more than twice that long. Don't
> know if they lift that limit for document uploads (which was an option),
> but you may want to look into that ;)
>
> If you do need to shorten it, it gets a little ranty in the middle, so
> some of that could probably be cut down, or removed entirely...
>
> -Toke



-- 
Dave Täht
endo is a terrible disease: http://www.gofundme.com/SummerVsEndo