On Wed, Nov 28, 2012 at 09:20:58AM -0800, Paul E. McKenney wrote:

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> > When you've done another round on the document, I'll do a more detailed
> > read.
> 
> Sounds good!  I expect to have another version by the end of the weekend.

And please see attached.  Thoughts?

							Thanx, Paul