<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Mar 25, 2019, at 3:34 AM, <a href="mailto:ecn-sane-request@lists.bufferbloat.net" class="">ecn-sane-request@lists.bufferbloat.net</a> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Working on getting better plotable data</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">What do y'all think? </span><a href="https://lists.bufferbloat.net/pipermail/ecn-sane/attachments/20190325/2cbfe1a1/attachment.odp" class="">https://lists.bufferbloat.net/pipermail/ecn-sane/attachments/20190325/2cbfe1a1/attachment.odp</a></div></blockquote><br class=""></div><div>Here are a couple comments on the progression of the slides:</div><div><br class=""></div><div>1: Intro - good</div><div>2: Blank - placeholder - you'll fix this</div><div>3: The Problem - good. Maybe say that *loss* only provides binary signal per RTT -> Oscillation -> Bang-bang control theory</div><div><br class=""></div><div><div>Then... swap slides 4 & 5</div><div><br class=""></div><div>4: Two Congestion Signals - major bullet points</div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>- Congestion should be an earlier signal than loss</div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>- Swap CE & SCE, noting CE gives coarse info</div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>- We propose SCE, to give high fidelity information</div><div><br class=""></div><div>5: Rename heading - s/The Solution/The Implementation/</div></div><div><br class=""></div><div>6: State Diagram - good</div><div>7: Experimental Plan - good</div><div><br class=""></div><div>8: Plot - You need to have an explanation of the graph on the final slide. It's a bit hard to read the axes, but way more important is a clear description of what the heck we're looking at. It won't be as detailed as [Explaining RRUL Charts](<a href="https://www.bufferbloat.net/projects/bloat/wiki/RRUL_Chart_Explanation/" class="">https://www.bufferbloat.net/projects/bloat/wiki/RRUL_Chart_Explanation/</a>) but someone reading (only) the slides should be able to understand what the plot shows.</div><div><br class=""></div><div>9: Some kind of summary</div><div><br class=""></div><div>Good luck!</div><div><br class=""></div><div>Rich</div></body></html>